From the desk of Paladen
I would like to get some input from my readers as I work on Chapter 5 of the Assessment. If you have read the previous 4 chapters now you know that she has found her mother, Leta whom she has thought died many years ago. Leta is the slave of Dantor the Physician at his country Villa outside of Victoria. Now I would like to hear from all of you as to what you think I should do with the lovely kajira Leta.
- During the attack on the Villa, Leta is captured by the raiders and carried off to a distant slave market. Where she may or may not show up in a future story here or with Tracker of Gor.
- During the attack on the Villa, Leta is seriously wounded by one of the raider but survives with a future that has yet to be written or decided.
- During the attack on the Villa, Leta is mortally wounded and crosses over to the City of Dust to join her former Companion and Master.
I look forward to your input by posting your vote in the comments section below. And don't be afraid to let me know your thoughts on why you voted the way you did. Or guesses on what all is to come in this final chapter of the Assessment
Thank you
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Definitely keep Leta 'in play' so to speak. The slave market idea is good, but if using the 'seriously wounded' option, perhaps without scarring. Internal wounds that heal, perhaps.
ReplyDeleteThank you. I have been tossing this one around a little. And without giving away too much have a couple plausible ways to go with either before or after Ragenta's trip to Ar in which she ends up a slave herself. If located after then Atilas would have a lovely matched set of slaves.
ReplyDeleteI had really hoped to get more feed back given the number of views on this post. I didn't realize until I started writing and posting how much feed back from viewers and readers means to the artist and writer. Which has caused me to reach out in the comments on other blogs or on Deviant Art.
ReplyDeleteSo if you like say so, it you don't then say it's sucks and why. I may or may not take your advice and input. But it is still important to know what is working and what is not
Thank you