From the desk of Paladin
I hope that you all have enjoyed the first chapter of "No Good Deed". As vyeh pointed out the title does derive from the phrase "No Good Deed Goes Unpunished"
One thing that I am doing differently this time is adding more artwork that mirrors the events as they happen. Which doubles my work load but I think that the results speak for themselves. I have gotten all the art work finished for Chapter two and actually reworking some of the stuff I had done already for Chapter three.
I plan to start writing Chapter 2 hopefully later this evening, But with this being a holiday week coming up with Thanksgiving here in the State. I still have to host and prepare one meal at my home and another that is being hosted elsewhere. So my time might get a bit limited. But plan to get it done and posted soon as possible.
I want to thank both Tracker of Gor and vyeh for their comments and encourage my other readers to leave their thoughts on either the post here or on the ones posted on Deviant Art. Your thoughts and comments are the only payment that those of us that do this for free receive. So a few words can mean a lot.
In closing I would like to wish all my readers and followers here in the US a Happy Thanksgiving. And will post a couple of the extra images that are not going to be used in the stories.
Atilas with Ragenta as his chained slave in the Fowled Anchor. Great image but I went with something similar that you will see later. This is just to wet your appetites.
One more
Concept image of Lt. Davis now
The kajira Beaker has begged me to inform you that she jealous of Ragenta's white tunic with the red shoulder straps and bodice. She feels that with modifications for her smaller bust it would suit her very well. She also understands that the tunic hem could perhaps be shorter, but understands that for now, Regenta is just pretending to be a slave.
ReplyDeleteShe is an impudent thing, but has her uses.
Tracker:
Delete(1) Although the white tunic with the contrasting red bodice will certainly draw the eyes of men, free women and kajirae, isn’t kajira Beaker worried that the bodice provides too much coverage and will impede the ability of her master and his men to stroke below her bust?
(2) Hasn’t Lesley showed kajira Beaker the magic of falling out of her clothes?
(3) Kajira Beaker only wants a shorter hem to show off her fire crotch, which draws the male gaze, unless, of course the man is accompanied by his Free Companion!
vyeh
Paladin:
ReplyDelete(1) While your stories can stand on their own, the images enhance the experience. The image of Atilas and Regenta grabs me viscerally in a way words do not. There is a saying a picture is worth a thousand words.
(2) I bet if you posted the image of brunette Regenta on DA, it would attract a lot of favs. You could put a link to No Good Deed in the text, maybe a short synopsis.
(3) I appreciate your dedication to Chapter 2. I look forward to the Fowled Anchor!
(4) Thank you for No Good Deed!
(5) Happy Thanksgiving!
vyeh